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Dark Dreams
This was my first "complete" novel, based on the mud (Shadowmud) that I played on. I will not be revising this for publication. It took me two years, off and on, to write Dark Dreams. I wrote it while I was picking up my Bachelor's in CIS. It was about six months real writing time.
Dedication
This book is dedicated to Benjamin and Matthew,
who begin where I end, and end where I begin.
Story
Characters
Responses
Jynx (Dec 8, 1996)
i really think it would have been a little polite of you to have asked before u put me into a public story, some of us dont want to be in a story, and would appreciate having the option of 'declining the honor'
jynx
Tank (Dec 9, 1996)
I didn't get to finish...was reading a couple here and there :(
Well I liked what I got to read. :)
Jaren (Dec 9, 1996)
Bummer. I really enjoyed your story, all 32 chapters or so? What happened?
Jaren
Raist (Jan 15, 1997)
I want more :)
Raist the fan
Boromir (Feb 16, 1997)
Milady, you have inspired me to create my own realm in the fair Geocities :) Would you be interested in having mutual links to each other's pages?
Your humble servant,
Boromir.
Fain (Mar 3, 1997)
I love the idea of being in your story, as long as I can kill either Basbear or Raist ;)
Just teasing :)
Trea (Mar 3, 1997)
I hope my part was flattering to me. But if not, who cares, no one else out there knows Trea, and me and Trea aren't neccessarily the same person.
So write away babe! :))
Phantasmo (Mar 3, 1997)
Keep me in it.. in fact, make me the lead char for the rest of the story :P
that way it would rock even more :)
Uncool (Mar 6, 1997)
You said to read it. How would I go about that?
Leandra (Mar 10, 1997)
You mentioned your story but what is the address to your web page?
I'm a bit scared to see what you did to me in the story hehe.
Ahh well...I don't have TOO many skeletons I don't think :)
Leandra
Aivlys (Mar 22, 1997)
hiya you:)
Go ahead and use me...i really enjoy your story...i thought it was great and will be happy to be in it...by the way hi...havent been here in a while:) well gotta go...ill se ya around:)
Aiv the Radish King!:)
Cyndre (Mar 29, 1997)
Read your story (the 12 chapters posted) today in keyboarding class.. hehe
Perfect opportunity to look around on the net. Anyway, complaints and observations as follows:
You prolly knew this, but I was errantly married to Freg, not Fain. <shudder>
Let's see.. kinda bemused about how you portrayed me... ie since when would I hide behind the altar? i'd stand watch quietly to see what happened and then possibly join in. and syntax... hmm... "Oh shit!" is not one of my expressions.. I'd either go with:
"Damn!" he spat.
OR
"Bastards." he mumbled.
Main complaint.. I haven't killed anyone or destroyed anything yet. I need black lightning and my V. More cynicism. "SARCASTIC EXISTENCE"
Endure my criticism in good faith please..
-Cyn
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